The Girl in the Rain

Standing alone in the crowd with thousands of droplets of water that fall down into my face. I don’t know what to do, I don’t know where to go, I don’t know who I’m ?, why do I exist?, why is it happen into my life. Did I do something wrong? I can’t see anything? Help me! Then all went black.

Hey! Hey!

Hmmmmm..??

Where am I?

 In the hospital.

Who are you?

I’m Zac.. Zac Takishima. And what’s your name?

I’m Gabriella Cruz.

I call your family they will arrive soon.

Ok.

Then there’s a silent moment inside the room. Then the door open.

*Bang!

Ella! How are you? Did someone hurt you? Tell me?

Shut up! Tita. You acted like my mother. Can you please get out!

But…

No buts.

Ok.

*Sigh..

The boy was confused what’s happening between them but Ella look at him with the angry look.

What are you looking at?

I said get out boy!

Ok ok

Then he smiles at me. After how many days I confined in the hospital, I went home. Yeah home I feel the emptiness of this house but I rather called it HELL. My mom and dad are separated. I leave with my father but I can’t feel the love and care. I do everything just my father notice me but I failed. I joined frats and rebel against with my father. They called me BRAT, YES! I’m a brat.

I don’t know why my mother left me and have another family. I didn't know what’s wrong with us but one thing I’m sure she hates us maybe my mother didn't love my father because they are just arrange marriage.

One day, I question God why me? Why you didn't give me a happy life and family. God you’re so unfair!  LIFE IS SO UNFAIR..

After 1 year, I waited my mother to come back but she didn't come. 1 year, I dream a happy life with my family but it didn't happen anymore. What a life! I always attempt to commit suicide. And if I do that my mother will come and rescue me.

At the point I almost kill myself, I hear some whispers they’re trying to say STOP KILLING YOURSELF! YOU CAN BE HAPPY AGAIN. KILLING IS NOT THE SOLUTION. FACE YOUR PROBLEM AND SOLVE IT.

Then I realize, if I kill myself I will not see my mother again and also I will waist my life without solving my problem. I know there’s a reason for everything. And God has a reason for it. Maybe God gave me this problem to make a stronger whatever circumstances came into my life. 

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POVERTY

Poverty

The problem that we faced today,

every minute, every second it grow and grow. 

Just like a wild flower everywhere you can see it grow.

We didn't notice that those flowers , it will affect our future,

did you hear them cry ? did you see how pitiful they are ? those baby flowers ?

if this will continue, more flowers can't eat, can't go to school, and can't have a descent house.

Because of this poverty more flowers will cry.

And they their selves in the wrong path, the devil ;

the reason why more flowers turning into evil.

We must move now! so that we prevent them turning into evil one.

Move ! Move ! Move !

that's what we want.

Prevent that's the only SOLUTION.

FOOTNOTE TO YOUTH by Jose Garcia Villa

Dodong fell in love to Teang and he want to marry Teang as soon as possible.When he got home from work.The table was already set for supper, after eating Dodong confronted his father to tell about marrying Teang.His father was remained silence and that silence became awkward.The father of Dodong asked him if he is sure to marry Teang then Dodong said yes.His father has no choice because of the wish of his son.His father felt pity on him.

Dodong stood in the sweltering noon heat.He was still as a tree and his  thoughts were confused and also he was afraid.Teang giving birth in the house,when his mother called him he was ashamed to his mother of his youthful paternity.It made him feel guilty.Dodong walked ahead to their house and he saw his wife asleep and it look pale but when he heard a tiny voice.He felt happiness in him.

Blass was not Dodong's only child.Many more children came.When Blass was eighteen he came home one night very flastered and happy.Blass could not sleep that time and he talked to his father about Tona that he want to marry her but Dodong was against to his son because he was very young and the life of marriage would be hard.Dodong was helpless because he can see himself  to his son when he was young.He could not do anything.Dodong looked wistfully at his young son in the moonlight.He felt extremely sad and sorry for him.

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I like this story because it says that marriage life is hard specially to the youth and also It gives us lessons that in our every decision it affects to our future or what other says think before you move.

The style of writing of the author is nice but he must also add more the point of view about  the parents of Dodong, how they felt after hearing that their son wants to marry Teang.The flow of the story is nice and the setting is fit to the characters and this story is very nice to the youth like me and gives as lesson specially in marriage life.